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Thursday, February 19, 2015

The Elevator Scene - Chapter 2 of REVIVAL by @MKGilher

Ch. 2 of REVIVAL by M.K. Gilher is up on Koobug.

One reviewer referred to this scene as "One of the most erotic moments I have read in a book."

I open my eyes just as the last couple of people turn to their sides and scuffle their way onto the elevator. The ripple effect forces me backward, pushing my bottom right into the Italian-shoed stranger. 

Well, this is a great first day back, Summers. You're gonna be late, have a panic attack, and rub yourself up against a stranger with gorgeous shoes. Perfect. There should definitely be laws preventing me from leaving my apartment on certain days. 

I hear a weird creaking noise and the lights flicker. I'm jostled about before the elevator jerks to a halt in mid-flight and the lights go out. My fellow elevator patrons gasp and grumble. Random lights appear as people pull out their cellphones. In the commotion of the crowded elevator, I'm heaved back onto my Italian-shoed stranger even more.

I feel strong hands wrap around my hips. I'm so close I can feel his chest rising and falling on my back.

Oh. Sweet. Jesus.

 I can't fucking breathe. I can't fucking breathe. 

 His breath is steady and calm on my neck, almost as if he's enjoying watching me struggle for my self-control. The cat pinning the mouse down by the tail as the mouse struggles to get away.

Read more of this chapter here http://koobug.com/mkgilher?p2587
Or download a sample from one of these sites: Amazon http://goo.gl/att3tk
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ARe http://goo.gl/J8iN3z (Excerpt also posted on ARe)